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I hope you like it. It is the longest story i have ever written. This Story is a mix of a few of my style of writing so please tell me what u think
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Really? very good work but you need to be more creative and stop using the same inflation processes. Plz work on grammar if grammar was great and you used different processes you would BE one of the best writers on DA. k bai